Blockbuster41
Selected Tue, Jun 27, 2023
Max was uncomfortable with the new arrivals. He voiced his concern to his friends.
"Hey, I don't wanna, like... discriminate or anything, but do you think-"
"I know." His friend, Jakie cuts in. Together, they take in the sight. A few dozen survivors board their ship. Just like any other day. But the closer they came, the more deformities the boys noticed on them. Not that they hadn't seen deformed people get rescued from Sol before. But this.... was different.
These people weren't missing any limbs. They weren't burned, scarred, or injured in any way, at least, they didn't appear to be.
Max turns to Jakie.
"Maybe it's just the radiation? Zero Day really decimated the place... They could just be sick..."
"I don't think so. I... They kinda creep me out..." Jakie replied.
A man with his eyes a little too far apart. A boy with an asymmetrical head. A woman with one arm longer than the other.
"There's no way they are from Sol. They hardly look human." Jake continued.
At these words, one little girl looks at him. Jakie smiles.
The girl smiles back. As her mouth opens, he sees that she has no teeth. Or tongue. Or... anything.
Jakie shudders.
The last of them board the ship, and the "Sol Survivor" leaves the docking area, presumably to continue searching.
Max says, "We should leave. We are being rude."
Jakie agrees, and they walk back towards their quarters. They wish each other goodnight and go to bed. But while Max dozes off, all he can think about is what life will be like with these... new people.
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The emergency light flashes. Max opens his eyes slowly. He rubs his eyes and looks at the time. 2:42? He looks up at the emergency light, spinning around just over his room door. What's going on?
Just then, the sirens go off all across the ship. Max goes into panic mode and dresses himself, trying to remember the protocol for an emergency. Buttoning his shirt as he gets to the door, he puts his hand on the pad to unlock it.
It opens.
A little girl is standing in front of him.
"What the.. hey, it's not safe!"
Max points to the emergency siren.
"Where's your mommy?"
The girl simply shakes her head.
"Fine, just come with me." Max reaches out his hand.
The girl smiles.
A big, big smile.
(My first time writing, I'm open to criticism!:) )
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Submitted by Blockbuster41 on Fri, Jun 23, 2023 to /r/WritingPrompts/
Full submission hereThe prompt
The group of new humans who just joined your ship begin to act weird about the humans already present...they keep mentioning something call the uncanny valley? Maybe this is a place on Sol?
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